Sooo..This forum is kind a dead a bit. I decided to start to post one of my stories here. Today I will post to you prologue. If you won't like it just say to me. It's up to you, to read it or not.

~~~Make it happen~~~

Dedicated to my sis

Prologue

Even the smallest child in the world has a dream. Well talking about me….I am not child anymore. Two years I live on my own, trying to make my dreams come true, but nothing. Everybody thinks that I am not worth anything. At the university I am studying economic and now I hate myself that I chose it. In the town that I live there is an art school it’s the same as university, there go people from very good families. That school was for me, because dance is my passion. There go everybody that loves to sing, draw and dance. When I was small I had some ballet lessons, but I stopped going there, because ballet is for those Barbie girls that put on their face lots of mascara. Yuck, I hate those girls. So coming back to me 3500 Euros for one year in that school was too much to my mum. She said that it won’t help to me in the future at all, so we will just waist the money. Guess what, I listened to her. Everyday lots of numbers are in my head, but what’s the point if my heart is dancing.

Last edited by Laura on Sat Mar 20, 2010 8:33 pm; edited 44 times in total

Wooow, you really surprised me
Jey, i'm so happy to see one of your stories here
And for sure- i can't wait for more!
Thank you

It sounds really good.

I dislike Economics too..

Already like it and curious for more Laura ^^

Part 1

- Monika bring your ass down, now.
I heard somebody shouting. It was one of my house mates. In that house lived five persons: me, Adan, Araceli, Bruno and Claudia. Adan studied with me economic, he was really good at it. Araceli was one of those Barbie girls. She was going to that art school, but after few months she was thrown away, because she was too stupid to learn a new song. I could give everything if I was in her place there. Bruno and Claudia was a couple and they both studied literature.
- She is real pain in ass. Again somebody shouted.
- Shut up and look at yourself. Shouted Adan.
I recognized that other voice it was Araceli. Jesus I really started to hate her.
- It was the last time that I am begging her to go out of the bed. Araceli shouted.
- I am not deaf. Nobody asked you to do this, so what do you want? Asked Adan.
- Nerd. She said in angry voice.
- And you are the stupidest blonde I have ever seen. Don’t forget to smile when it’s lightening. Adan said and gave five to Bruno.
Claudia was sitting and laughing with her hand on her mouth that Araceli would not see that she was laughing from her.
- I will leave you, because I am tired of you all.
- Finally. Said Adan.
- Adios Barbie girl. Said Bruno.
I went out of my bed and went to the bathroom. When I looked to my mirror I got scared. My skin was pale, black circles were under my eyes. I washed my face and brushed my tooth’s. Also I put some mascara, that they won’t see such a face and I don’t want to hear again lections from Adan that I shouldn’t listen music until very late and make new steps. I went down stairs and on the stairs I met with Araceli. She looked at me with eyes full of anger. That moment atmosphere was very stretch and seemed that she could kill me with her eyes.
- Hey. What’s happened to her? I asked.
- I think that she has slept with snakes and one of them had bitted to her. Said Claudia.
- You don’t look good. Said Adan.
- What do you mean? I asked and turned my face from him.
- Even a mascara won’t hide your tired face. You should forget those stupid dances and put all your minds to economic, because from the last work you got 6. Said Adan.
- All those numbers are not for me. How I can count when music is playing in my head? I asked and rolled with my eyes.
- Then while studying important things you should press pause to your music player that is mount in your head. He said.
- Will anybody one day understand what I really want?
- Tell us then. Said Claudia.
- I want to dance, and that the entire world would know me. This is my dream.
- So make it happen. Said Bruno as it was so easy to do it.
- Yeah right, now I go to dance and all world will know me. It’s not that easy. I said.
- Nothing is easy Monika. Said Adan.
- What’s new on newspaper? I asked while Bruno sipped his coffee.
- What can be new in Spain? Murders, burglaries. He said.
- Like always. Said Claudia.
- And some guy with Austrian surname, that I don’t remember is going to open night club. First page is his. It seems that is an event of a year. Said Bruno a bit angry.
- Show me. I said and he gave a newspaper to me.
- Rich boy. I said and thrown newspaper on the table.

- Nerd. She said in angry voice.
- And you are the stupidest blonde I have ever seen. Don’t forget to smile when it’s lightening. Adan said and gave five to Bruno.


Hahahaha xD Old joke, but amazing xD

- Hey. What’s happened to her? I asked.
- I think that she has slept with snakes and one of them had bitted to her. Said Claudia.

Loool xD

Great part Laura (:

Thank you Mar

Amazing, fantastic part!!!!
Thank you

Part 2

- Just have lots of money and all world will be yours. Said Claudia.
- Who will join me while I will rob the bank? I asked and looked to Bruno.
- Don’t look at me. I would better do it by myself and not with a force of the money. He said.
- Do you think he is happy? Claudia asked.
- While looking at his big smile I think that yes.
- I can give 100 percents that his smile is fake. Said Adan.
- You even haven’t seen him. Claudia said and laughed.
- So what? Oh look at the time after half an hour we have lecture, so hurry up. He said.
- Like always when you just start to talk with him about something, he starts to talk about others. Said Bruno.
- Are you going Monika? Adan asked.
- Yes just let me take my books. I said.
After few minutes I was holding my books in my hands and we left.
- Homework was so easy. He said while walking.
- Homework? I asked.
- Let me guess you didn’t do it. He said.
I just nodded.
- Professor will ask you, because you got 6 from the last work.
- So….now I will get 2, no big deal.
- Will you look at it serious? He asked.
- No Adan, I don’t get it and I will never be good at it as you.
- Then why you are still going there?
- Because I have to. What I will say to my mum? Her dream was to see me having a really good place at work. I said.
- But it’s not your dream. I see in your eyes that you are sick of such a life that you are having now. I want to see you happy Monika, because you are worth it, follow your dream. Adan said.

He was the first person, that said such a words to me.
- I will tell that you are sick and when I will come back from university I will help you to do everything that you would get a good mark.
- Really? I asked, because I couldn’t believe in my ears.
- Yes. Go back home or spend that time in the city centre, but be careful that nobody would see you, because then we will be dead. He laughed.
- Yes sir. I smiled.
He kissed me on a cheek and went. While I was standing and watching how he was walking away from me. He was something special to me, but don’t think that I was in love with him, no. He was like a brother or a guardian angel. All the time he was helping me. I have never heard bad words as also from Bruno and Claudia. At that point I was really lucky that I met such a persons in my life, but don’t count Araceli. From the first day there was something wrong between us. All the time I was fault for everything and she was miss smarty, but the true was that God while creating her forgot to insert brains to her head, poor girl. I turned and went to the city centre. There weren’t lots of people, so I felt save, that nobody will see me. I was going and looking to the shops windows. Black, yellow, red and green dresses were running in my eyes. They all looked so wonderful. I stopped and looked to the black dress it was so beautiful with some crystals on it. I closed my eyes and I saw me wearing it and dancing with….. Suddenly I opened my eyes. What a hell that guy from newspaper is doing in my minds? I asked myself and looked at the price of that dress. Jesus 750 Euros. I shocked my head and just walked away. After walking I came near that art school: “Escuela de arte de Madrid”, was written on the wall over the door. My dream place, but I don’t think so that I could be here too. You want to know why? Just look around is real Barbie house, oh and look here goes Ken. In my mind I said to boy that passed my way and near the doors turned to me. Oh my God, that Ken guy was the same guy from newspaper. I was just standing and looking at him while he looked at me and waved. I waved back and then I heard some noise.
- Mikel wait for me.
I turned and saw another Barbie. I am so stupid, he waved to her. He hugged her and while smiling entered. This is the most stupid situation that I have ever had. This could happen only to me, now he will think that I am stupid, but why should I care what he will think? He even doesn’t know me. Passed few hours and I was still walking in Madrid streets. It was too early to go back home, because Adan will come back there only at 4 and now were 12. I went to café “Beso del ángel“. It was mine and Claudia‘s favourite one. Hot chocolate and a peace of chocolate cake......jumm there can‘t be anything better. It was a bit strange to sit there alone, because all the time Claudia was with me. It was a bit silent, though I always remembered this place with really good music. This café was for young people. After university always here was crowded. Good rhythm reached my ears. I recognized that song, it was Justin Timberlake-losing my way. It was one of my favorite songs. I started to sing it in my mind……And it is breaking me down, Watching the world spin ‘round, While my dreams fall down, Is anybody out there? It is breaking me down, No more friends around, And my dreams fall down, Is anybody out there? Can anybody out there hear me? Cuz I can’t seem to hear myself, Can anybody out there see me? Cuz I can’t seem to see myself, It’s gotta be a heaven somewhere, Can you save me from this hell? Can anybody out there feel me? Cuz I can’t seem to feel myself……Suddenly I came back to this world and saw a menu on my table.

but the true was that God while creating her forgot to insert brains to her head,

Genius


Great part and great song Laura
Loved it

Naww, amazing part Laura! Thank you
Can't wait for more

Part 3

Guy that was working there came to me.
- No university? He asked.
- Sorry? Oh…. I left because I don’t feel so well. I said.
- So hot chocolate and a piece of chocolate cake as always? He asked.
- No, this time just hot chocolate. I said and he went.
I turned my head to window and saw Barbie with Ken and some other friends coming here. They were talking and laughing. They sat next to me.
- I hope your brother won’t throw us away from university, as from now he is director there. Said that Barbie.
- Oh come on Beatriz, he can’t do anything to me and if he will say something about you then better he should hold on. Said Mikel.
I remembered his name. That’s strange, it took for a while when I learned my university friend’s names and now I saw him once and I already remember his name. What is going on with me? I felt that somebody was looking at me. I lifted up my eyes and I met with his eyes.
- Here is your chocolate. Said waiter.
- Could you pack it to me? I decided to drink it outside. I said fast.
- Sure, just wait.
I still felt his eyes looking at me, but I just hidden my face with my hair. Waiter came back with my chocolate and I ran out from there as there somebody has thrown a boom. Chocolate was so hot that it started to burn my hand. I didn’t left how I dropped it from my hands. I was almost running down Madrid streets, when suddenly I saw economic professor. I stopped and looked at him. That moment I had to go to some shop and hide myself, but it felt that my legs were made from stone and it was so heavy to move them. He turned to my side and saw me standing. My heart started to tremble. I felt how a cold wave ran through my spine. Now I am dead. I thought.
- Miss Monika. He said.
- Professor. I said.
- As I can see you are not that sick as Adan said.
- I didn’t felt good in the morning. I said.
- But now you are in the city centre. You really disappointed me. I don’t have what to do just take you tomorrow to the director of university, of course if tomorrow you will reach the university. He said.
- I will come tomorrow.
- Then until tomorrow. He said and rushed.
That’s it. Everything is really over now, I thought. Bad marks, not going to the university it enough reason’s to thrown me away from there. Maybe I am worth it, because I didn’t pay much attention to it. I came back home and saw Araceli. She was packing her things.
- Look who came home. She said.
I straight went to the stairs and didn’t said anything to her. In my room I turned on my laptop and checked my email. There were two new emails, one from my dad and the other one from my mum. I opened the first one.
Hola mi muñeca,
How are you? How university is going on? I am so proud of you. In our family we will have smart girl. How is mum? She is not writing to me. I hope she is not angry at me from our last conversation. I am quite good, hard working. You know I really like Italy, but still Spain is my home and nobody will change it. I will come back after 4 months, maybe for all time who knows. I missed you a lot. Write to me back soon.
Dad
Yeah right smart girl. I thought. I opened next one.
Moni,
What is going on with you? You don‘t write to me and you don‘t answer my calls. I hope that you are not doing those things that I am thing about. Don‘t try to say that you don‘t know what I am talking about. I am about DANCES. Don‘t make us dissapoint you. By the way how are you? Missed you honey. Call me. Love you.
Mum
Like always sarcastic messages from mum. She wrote dances in big letter and she thinks, that i will be scared. Then she should scare me with other thing, or maybe I will scare her with a new that i am thrown away from university. This moment I really feel I am am loosing control of my life. Everything is not going on by the plan that my mum made to me. I turned my laptop off. I didn’t felt in writing mood and I didn’t have what to say to them. I’ll better wait for tomorrow. I stood up and went to my window. I saw how Araceli was carrying heavy suitcases to her car. She was really leaving. It meant that from now on we will have to pay more for this house or to search new person to live here. I took deep breath and turned on my mp3 player. I had to feel a bit better and music was the only way to do it. I didn’t felt how I started to dance and forgot everything around me. I felt how my throat got dry and I went down stairs to have some drink. That moment opened the doors Adan, Bruno and Claudia walked in.
- Hey finally. I said.
- This day really sucked. Said Bruno.
- Guess who left us. I said.
- No way. Claudia said and almost started to jump from happiness.

I would jump too haha


Her mum is really a mean-machine *shakes head* I hope she'll go to that arts academy (:

Great part Laura

Barbie left
Amazing as always! Thank you!

Part 4

Everyone was so happy, but Adan saw that something wrong was with me.
- Is there something that we don’t know? He asked.
- No, everything is ok. I said and tried to smile.
- Fake smile, I smell something bad. Said Bruno.
- Yeah right. Maybe fire? I asked and walked to living room.
Adan came after me.
- What’s now Adan? I asked.
- You don’t say something to me.
- Leave me alone, I have enough problems. I said with high voice.
- I just want to help to you. He explained.
- I listened you and I didn’t go to university, at the city centre professor saw me…..so I think that tomorrow I will say adios to university. I said a bit angry.
- Don’t be so negative.
- I am not. I just look straight to eyes of reality.
- Let’s go, I will help you with homework. He said.
- I don’t need it. I said and almost run to my room. There I locked the doors.
I felt how anger was running through my veins. I was so angry at Adan and whole world, but I don’t know why. Maybe because he always wanted to know everything about me and help me. But he never understood that sometimes he should keep distance from me. I lied on my bed and started to look to my ceilings. What was waiting me now? Was the only question in my head. Should I start to search a job? But what kind of? I want to do something with dances, but I have to finish university to have a specialty. All evening I spent in my room. Claudia was knocking, but I didn’t answered. I opened my books and last time read something, it was the last time I was looking at them, well I thought so. I was too tired to dance before going to sleep and I just turned off the lights and closed my eyes. It was first night after a long time I had a dream. When I woke up, I didn’t understood if I was dreaming or it really happened in reality. As I can guess you want to know about what was my dream….. Well I saw Mikel in it. He was going down the street and we met. I didn’t looked at him, but he stopped and looked at me as he wanted to say something to me, but he didn’t had a chance because I walked away.
- I have to forget that nonsense. I said to myself while my hands lifted cold water to my face.
I went out of my room and saw Claudia.
- Morning. I said and smiled.
- Hey. Are you better today? She asked.
- I think so. Where is Adan? I want to talk with him. I said.
- Well he already left, I think he is angry at you.
- He has a right to be angry, because yesterday I was a real ass.
- You will talk at university then.
- If I will have time to.
- Why do you say so? Claudia asked.
- I will say to you everything when I will come back home, now I better will go.
- Go and eat something.
- Thanks, but no I don’t have appetite.
I took all my books and left. My heart was trembling almost like a first day I was going to school, but this time it was the last day, I think so. Near the university I saw how professor arrived. Near the doors he ran to me.
- Good morning Monika. It’s so nice to see you here. He said.
Those words sounded like I wasn’t here for a few years and finally I came back. It was only one day.
- Good morning. I said.
One of my hands was in my pocket and I felt how I crossed my fingers. I saw that he was in good mood, so I thought that maybe he forgot it and now everything will be ok.
- Are you ready to see director? I heard how he asked in low voice.
- To tell the truth no. It’s going to be my first time. I said and lowered my eyes.
- All the time something happens first time.
Yeah right first time. I wish I could see him in my place. I think this moment in his mind he is laughing from me. I will be the second student that with his help had to leave university. I hate him. He was saying something to me, but I even didn’t listen him, but maybe I should.
- So what do you think? Should we inform your parents? I heard last sentences.
WTF? That would be too much, but inform my parents of what? That one day I wasn’t here? What is going on with him? I haven’t seen a person that would hate me so much.
- Idiot. I didn’t felt how I said it out loud.
- What have you said? He asked.
- Huh? I turned my head to him.
Oh sh*t, just don’t say that I said it loud.